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david.tan
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Registered: July 2004
Location: Bandar Utama / Taiping
Posts: 10773
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(Wed) 30 November 2005 11:20am
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its been long time never see ur pix posting here 
hmm.. maybe i would prefer to see her left eye ? the eye contact are great !
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mcko
PM'er Latte
Registered: April 2005
Location: Miri, Sarawak
Posts: 274
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(Wed) 30 November 2005 1:05pm
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Rating: 5.00
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Sorry to say bro but this shot is kantoi until beyond saving already. A quick glance makes her look like Ryuichi Sakamoto.
2 main problems - mostly framing and crop related:
1. the wrinkly forehead and thin lines of hair there gives the illusion of a bald spot further off frame. Should frame more to show more hair beyond the forehead. This problem combo with overall messy hair and dry lips makes her look old.
2. Left eye blocked and only can see eye whites, very hantu-ish. Show more eye, or cover it completely.
Maybe can aim down from higher a bit, landscape orientation, but maintain the close crop look.
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kasyah
Lurker
Registered: August 2004
Posts: 5
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(Wed) 30 November 2005 1:37pm
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thanx fellas..
hay david~! i loike your TAK NAK sign~! hahaha
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Sisterlance
Banned
Registered: January 2005
Posts: 2062
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(Thu) 1 December 2005 3:50pm
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forehead crop bothers me.
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SoErique
PM'er Cappuchino
Registered: September 2005
Posts: 997
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(Fri) 2 December 2005 1:04am
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erm as mentioned forehead and the eye lor. and maybe its just me the hand one the far corner. kinda distracting. if wanna include that. include the full hand dun just leave the thumb and palm. just me two cents.
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ted
Supporter
Registered: July 2004
Location: Kajang, Planet Earth.
Posts: 10128
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(Tue) 6 December 2005 11:32pm
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the title will conjures up different imagery to different people
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khoking
Administrator
Registered: July 2004
Location: ShaShinKi City...
Posts: 19633
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(Thu) 9 February 2006 3:09pm
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Rating: 10.00
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I like the angle and teh face expression...Excellent!
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kvct
Hawaiian Kona PM'er
Registered: July 2005
Posts: 2741
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(Thu) 9 February 2006 9:06pm
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seductively attractive.
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catmeow
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Registered: February 2008
Posts: 1
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(Thu) 28 February 2008 10:32am
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Rating: 6.00
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