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Poster: ari7474tme (see this users gallery) Vanessa in my home made (wannabe) studio. Any comments on how to improve or what I did wrong would be greatly appreciated. thanks
· Date: (Sat) 14 October 2006 · Views: 849 · Filesize: 65.2kb, 103.2kb · Dimensions: 573 x 900 ·
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Rating: 5.00
Keywords: alone lonely
Exposure Details: 1/50sec f/13 @ iso100
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File name:	vanessa.jpg	File size:	105684 bytes
File date:	2006:10:14 16:13:11	Date/Time:	2006:10:15 04:54:38
Resolution:	573 x 900	Jpeg process:	Baseline

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mcko
PM'er Latte

Registered: March 2005
Location: Miri, Sarawak
Posts: 371

(Thu) 19 October 2006 7:56am

Rating: 5.00

The black and white treatment and lighting is good, but there's no clear definition of her shoulder, right arm and upper body, Right now it looks like her legs are growing out from her chest under the white jacket like a hermit crab. Just showing more of her knee or right thigh would be enough to break this illusion.

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ari7474tme

PM'er Mocha

Registered: March 2005
Location: Shah Alam
Posts: 543

(Fri) 20 October 2006 3:39pm

Thanks for the comments bro. Will try again next time. Will watch the highlites

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